The Cowboy Way

This is one of the antagonists in my story Im developing. He's like a god cowboy, able to track people through dimensions and even time and space. He gave his arm to his father, a type of celestial being as a sacrifice, he was then given a new one that links him to his god's power. His story starts when Zoe Thunder escapes her world to warn ours, he is sent by his god to find her and bring her back. Takes him sometime (around 150 years or so... dimensional travel is tricky) but eventually he finds her and it takes the Allies to take him down. Critiques are welcomed. Thanks for looking

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